User blog comment:Red Compassion, Red Love, Red Hate/No Gravity V/@comment-24146210-20140910194142

Red, this story was amazing. All the research you did, and just your writing overall, were incredible.

The title was something I caught on to, because I listen to Parachute every day XD but whatever. The lyric references are awesome and add to the story's overall beauty. The small details were captivating and made me want to read it forever. In fact, I go back and read all the chapters sometimes! I hope that you never doubt your abilities because this story was just beautiful and it may be just me, but I think you should become an author! The little details like the butterfly and not really saying much about Ally's ex boyfriend and even just each paragraph in general had a small thing about it that just brought tears to my eyes because this stuff actually happens. People get abused and are scared to speak, try to kill themselves or even kill other people and you portrayed it perfectly and the emotion was incredible. You probably brought awareness to this sort of thing because there are younger people on here that read these stories and need to know that this happens in life but there's always someone who will be your 'Parachute' (references, gotta love 'em) and things will get better. I loved this story and hope that someday, you will write more because even if everyone else thinks "Oh the chapters are sooooo looooong! I can't read this." I'll still read because honestly, they'd be missing out!

Wow I feel like I just typed an essay XD