User blog comment:Hugs4ADollar/Little Butterfly - Chapter One/@comment-25187668-20140717191227

Nice plot, man! Hahaha, pancakes. Nice grip on characters and plot. Can't wait what will cheer Ally up!

P.s. Austin, why? Couldn't you be a little more careful? She did say "Don't touch my book" so many times that we lost count.