User blog comment:Mrs.NiallHoran13/Love has always been here Auslly FanFiction/@comment-4717855-20121027155938

The way you're formatting it is a bit confusing... Like, if someone's having a conversation, it's spaced out like this:

"Bla bla bla," Alien #1 said.

"Blu blu BLU!" Alien #2 said back.

Like that...

Your grammar's a bit off, but otherwise, it's good! :)