User blog comment:Red Compassion, Red Love, Red Hate/No Gravity V/@comment-24392123-20140912095455/@comment-5384369-20140912192952

I'm glad that you liked this little chapter... thing... It was my little way of letting people kind of get to know what was going on in my head and my thought process throughout the story.

Glad you got it =) It takes one to know one right? I really like the butterfly too. I actually didn't even know abut it until I started playing game on my phone which includes butterflies. I knew I wanted to use the butterfly reference, but I just wasn't sure which butterfly to use. So, what happened was that the phone game has a wikia. So I wen there, searched for a really rare butterfly that looked cool... and bam!

I was planning on using the common rose or a sea green swallowtail, but the thing is that with the colors and the shape of the gold drop helicopis, with its colors and shape, it can be looked at in two ways, which is what I was going for.

And it's fine if you didn't catch onto the arcade game or outfit reference. I mean, the arcade game was only in the first episode, and it was only when it was blurry and in the background when someone was talking. Actually, a lot of the stuff that was listed in the practice rooms were actually taken from the first episode (both the before and after scenes). And as for the outfits, I don't think a lot of people actually got it. I mean, 3 seasons of Ally Dawson outfits. I just chose one that I liked, and the fact that it had lace and was paired up with a necklace in order to relate it back to her old style was just pure coincidence =)

Yeah, so far, I've been getting good feedback about disclosing who "he" would be. And even in my first chapter I said I didn't want to bash one character. Because, honestly, it's not really fair because they've done nothing wrong. I could understand using like Trent because he was kind of a jerk, but still.

I actually find it s weird because right after I finished this story, another huge story comes out in the news about Ray Rice, who was caught on camera domestically abusing his wife/girlfriend. I just found that really weird that my story was about abuse, and a news story comes out abut the same thing...

No, don't be afraid. I'm sure that yours will be good, I'm, personally, just not a big fan of them. I mean, people liked yours much more than mine. I may not be able to pull off a good epilogue/ending, but I'm sure you will! I'll probably continue writing, but probably just for amusement or whatever =) Yeah, my friend has the fanfiction account, so I asked her to post it on there because some people requested it. Maybe some day you and I could do some sort of collaboration =)

Thanks! But I should really be thanking you. I mean, I tried to comment for everyone's and tried to write a comment for at least every chapter, but I know that a lot of people didn't do that, so you commenting every chapter really meant a lot to me.

Your story was amazing and you were so sweet with your kind comments! I hope to see more of your writing in the near future.