Talk:Big Dreams & Big Apples/@comment-65.123.60.14-20121229002017

This is a really short chapter guys, just something that I came up with at the moment and wanted to share with you guys. I loved the reviews, thank you so much! I'll reply to some at the end xx

She gets to class before everyone else, probably because everyone is in the hallway gossiping about her. Gossiping made her sick. Actually, almost everything made her sick. She plopped down on a desk and took out her brown leather book. She took out her black ink pen and started to write in it. A couple minutes in, a shadow appeared, blocking the light that hit her journal. She cautiously looked up to see a short girl. She had black curly hair, bouncing up in down in excitement. She had a cheeky smile and a sort of scared-ish expression on her face at the moment.

"Um hi, I just wanted to welcome you to our school. I'm Trish by the way." She said, taking a seat next to Ally. She had an unsure feeling about this girl. I mean would she really want a person clinging around to her? Trish seemed like the "happy go skip" type, not the type Ally was used to. Well not anymore anyways. On the other hand, she could always use a hand around school, get information about everyone, who's who and such. And who knows, maybe shes not all happy.

"Hi." I managed to say, trying to control all my thoughts at once. "I'm Ally." I gave her a small nod before going back to my book. I was just trying to figure out who was who out there, who that weird guy with the red hair and weird pants are. And who that girl was, who looked just about as slutty as any girl could be.

"Hey um Trish? Can you tell me about some people?" She nodded smiling. I told her about the red haired boy first. "Oh that's Dez. He's the best friend of the most popular boy in school. He's considered to be lucky, even though we have no idea why he dresses like how he dresses. He's really nice though, and really sentimental. But definitely weird." I nodded my head.

"What about that girl? The one outside, who looked like she was barely wearing anything?" She nodded understandingly. "That's Natasha Cambridge. The queen of the school. She's probably done it with every guy at this school who would let her. She's such a slut, and she's proud. She's the most popular person and most talked about girl here until you came along." I raised my eyebrows. "How so?"

"Every since you got here, you're everything that everyone talks about. She's dating the most popular boy in school, well she is technically. She's really just his play toy until he finds someone better. She's getting angry, but not as angry as some people." She said, probably talking about that blonde boy outside.

"Oh and just so you know Ally, that's Austin's seat." Since when did they have seats? That's just stupid. "Wait, who's Austin?" I asked in a confused tone.

She gave me a shocked look. "You don't know who Austin Moon is yet? He's only like the baddest bad boy here. And the most popular person too. Dez's best friend and Natasha's boyfriend. You seriously haven't met him?" I shook my head. She groaned loudly. "Blonde hair, bad temper, super awesome car? The most annoying girlfriend ever?" Putting the emphasis on annoying.

That's when it hit me. He was that blonde boy from outside who yelled at me for taking his parking space. That guy who's face turned super red and his eyes were huge when he found out I was a girl. I was surprised that I didn't burst out laughing. The guy who's been crowding my brain with annoying thoughts.

"Oh, I know him. I had a little interference with him earlier." She nodded her head. "Oh yeah I know, and if you think he got mad out there, just wait until he sees you again in his seat. He hates people who take things from him, popularity, places, epsecially attention. He's gonna be so furious with you." I laid back into my seat.

I'd like to see that.

"Who does she think she is?" The angered blonde boy paced back in forth, complaining to his "girlfriend" and his best friend. "I'm the person everyone talks about," He said, pointing a finger towards himself," Not her. Ok, she can't just come in here and steal everyone's attention." His face getting redder by the minute, filled with fury. He almost trashed that girls motorcycle until Dez convinced him not to. He growled, remembering the thought. He felt a tug on his arm.

"Dont worry about it baby! Let's just go." Natasha said in her sickening voice. He ripped his arm from her and started to walk away. I hated Natasha really, her annoying voice and her idea of fashion made me want to throw her over a bridge. But I actually have a heart, and I know others do to. I don't want to break peoples hearts, but for my sake, I would.

And I hope for that girls sake, that I don't have to see her again. I walk to my first class, everyone making a space for me to walk through. I smirked and walked through the halls, with my head held high. I started to regain my confidence, smiling and winking at many girls, as I walked down the hallway.

When I walked into my class I started to get mad. Some person was in my seat. They were obsessed with the book they were writing in, and Trish, the schools loud mouth, kept trying to talk to that person. Holding my head high, I walked over to whoever it was and tapped them on the shoulder. The person didn't budge, but kept writing in the book. I rolled my eyes, getting angrier by the second. I tapped them one more time, before I heard them groan and slowly turn around.

My eyes widend at the sight. It was the same girl from outside. Same curly brown hair that flowed down to her ribcage, same big brown eyes, and same black clothes. I scoffed. "You again?" She smirked and laid back into the seat. "Me again Blondie."

I realized that I didn't even know her name. She was a complete mystery to me. "That's my seat." She put her hands behind her head. "I know. Wow, two for two! First your little parking space and now your seat. I'm really getting good at this!" She smiled. I was about to say something, but she grabbed her stuff and stood up. "Here, I don't want your stupid seat." She walked right past me. "See you later Trish." She spoke as she started to walk out of the room.

"Hey!" I yelled, making her stop dead in her tracks. She turned around with curiosity and complete boredom all over her face. "Who are you?" I asked, eager to figure out. She smirked for the thousandth time today, and walked away. She turned her head back and looked me in the eye. "Noone important. I'll just be a mystery." She said as she left the room.

And she definitely was.

Like I said, insanely shortt :D Ok, some reviewing time stuffy stuff :)

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