User blog comment:Ausllyluv/Are we meant to be? One shot/@comment-11133912-20130905030433

Wow... This is really nice for your first fanfic! :)

"If only you weren't with Cassidy on your '1 day anniversary date'. Who the heck makes an anniversary for 1 day of dating? Oh yeah, ONLY BLONDES LIKE YOU GUYS,""

LOL, I loved that part! XD

Also, when Austin told Ally he loved her, it was adorable! Kinda cliche, but when he said that he would go to Sonic Boom and look at Ally, and when he said he stole her song to get her attention, that was pretty unique. I've never seen Austin explain it that way before. Usually, Austin would say something like, "I only dated them to get over you, Ally". I really like it that you made other reasons too! :D

Now that was a long explanation... :P I hope you understand it though.

One thing though, why does Austin call Ally "Allyson"?

"Ally pretty much didn't want to speak to me the whole night. We watched the Hobbit, ate popcorn, prank called, but that was it. We didn't have an actual conversation. When I tried to have one, she instantly wanted to do something else.THAT was sad. She made me breakfast in the morning and was gonna go out with Trish to the mall."

That part, you could go into detail. Let me explain.

You could show how Ally ignored Austin, like,

"'Hey Austin, you want some popcorn?'

'Yeah, sure' Austin replied.

Ally soon came out, holding a warm bowl of popcorn. She sat down and places the bowl between them.

'You wanna watch a movie?' Austin stood up, looking through the movies they had.

Ally only nodded silently.

'Why isn't Ally talking more?' Austin thought. He pondered over it, forgetting about the movie."

Okay, I'll admit that what I just wrote was completely horrible, but you get the idea? Then us readers can see how much Ally ignored Austin. :)

But overall, this is really nice! Keep writing! :D