User blog comment:Red Compassion, Red Love, Red Hate/No Gravity/@comment-24343688-20140713034252/@comment-24343688-20140717182548

No problem. :) And me too! I hope this passes into the next round. :)

Ahh, I see. But honestly, no, I can definitely tell it's not just another Auslly story. Austin (and Dez) was just introduced, so I couldn't exactly tell where it was going. But then I reread it, and got a sort of idea. :) I'm also glad you added Dez's humor, because as much as I love how the story's serious, the comic relief really brings it all together. :)

Alright, I get that. I guess it really depends on how much you want Trish's character in the story. You should just ask yourself, would she affect the main character (Ally) in a major way? Or just in general, is she important to the whole story altogether? That should bring a close enough idea of how much you should add her character in the story. :)