Talk:Freaky Friends & Fan Fiction/@comment-108.45.27.6-20130318140412

here's my plot for this episode

Austin: hay ally would you like to go on a date with me

Ally: yes i would love to

they went on their date and dez got a typewriter

Trish walks in sonic boom asks dez wheres austin and ally are

Dez: dont you listin they went on a date

Trish: oh. what are you doing

Dez: i'm writing a story about austin and ally

Back to the date

Austin: i happy you and i are dating

Ally: me too

Ally: do you here that

Austin: here what

Ally: it sounds like someone is screaming

Austin: i dont here anything wait i do here something

Dez is writing a scary story about austin and ally because its halloween

Austin/Ally here it again they both stand up

Austin grabs Ally's hand and they run outside

Ally: where is it coming from she holds austins hand tighter

Austin: i think its gone

they went for a walk before they went back to sonic boom

Austin/Ally walk into sonic boom looking scared

Trish: how was your... whats wrong

Ally: we heard some kind of screaming

Austin: yeah it was very loud but its like no one else heard it

Dez: thats funny i just wrote a story about you and there was screaming in it the screaming was Ally

Austin: but ally was standing next to me

Dez: well the screaming dosent heppen until the second date

Austin: ok but why was she screaming

Dez: she saw a huge shadow in the woods

Austin: why wasent i screaming

Dez: you were not there she told you to wait on the bench

Ally: we just have to make sure that we dont leave each other side when we are on a date

what do you think is it to much sorry if you dont like it