User blog comment:Red Compassion, Red Love, Red Hate/No Gravity/@comment-26480522-20140714134807

My goodness Red this was an amazing first chapter! Your writing skills are spectacular! It was so well detailed and the plot line is amazing! I truly believe if you write a novel it will become well known. I'm going to be honest here, I'm not a girl who loves to read stories like these, but I honestly want to finish reading this. I cannot wait till the next chapter.

Carry on writing Red! :)