User blog comment:MaroonerAle/FUN TIME!!!!!!!!!/@comment-50.152.217.209-20130525221442

Hey Ale!

Well, fist off with the FF, I like the idea! I just think that you would maybe make them into smaller paragraphs. I also think that you used to many exclamation points. I'm a person that when reading an FF, I like to tell then how they did and if they made any mistakes. I hope that if you decide to make this a full FF, to take my advice seriously. Um, what else...oh yeah! I like Austin's hatefulness towards the bird and the pet shop and all, but I also felt like it went by real fast! Add more to it if you decide to, again, make this into a FF. The ending was really cool.

So, I don't have much to say wether than that. But I love the blog as well and I love talking to you on Chatzy! Keep on being you! Which is really awesome! :D

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