Talk:Tracks & Troubles/@comment-5.67.180.139-20130514204503

this is my version of the first scene b4 the intro

ally is working on a song and trish walks in

trish: hey ally how are you

ally: gr8 thanks

trish:ok whats wrong?

ally: what nothing

trish: looks at her as if saying oh really

ally:ok fine im struggling to get over the break up with... starts to tear up

trish: austin?

ally: yeah trish what sould i do  it's been two weeks i thought i would be ok by now and he was the best thing that ever happend to me

trish: i dunno but i have got good news but i wonna wait untill austin and dez come

austin and dez walk in the practice room

austin: hey guys

ally looks at him dreamly

dez: ALLY

ally: huh? oh right sorry

trish: ok now that were all here i have big news 4 ally

ally: really? awsome

trish: ok i booked u to perform at the jungle cafe tomrrow night

austin and dez: wow awsome

ally: yeah awsome rembering back to chapters and choies and looks at austin where we had our first kiss

austin: haha yeah

ally: excuse me for a moment walks out upset about to cry

austin walk dwn stairs

austin: ally are u ok?

ally: (liying) yeah im great why?

austin: cus u walked out upset when we said about the kiss

ally: ok i have lots of things on my mind right now i'm just not ready to tellyou just yet ok?

austin : yeah k u know im alys here for u right?

ally: yeah i do thans austin that really means a lot

both hug ally forgets for a moment and doesn't let go

austin: ally are u ok?

ally: (smiling and thinking dream thoughts) yeah im gr8 why?

austin: cus u woun't let go not that im not enjoying it though

ally: oh sorry

austin: its ok dn't worry

both let go and laugh

austin: so are u ok now?

ally: yeah im better thanks austin

austin: ur welcome i'd do anything for you

ally: yeah me 2

both smile and head up to the practice room and the intro starts

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