Talk:Big Dreams & Big Apples/@comment-68.34.68.150-20121201012203

Fanfiction Chapter 6 Austin's POV

I walked to Ally's house and rang her doorbell. And well, she was jaw dropping beautiful. She had a beautiful pink dress with a gold belt. Her brown hair was curled to perfection and well yeah, she was amazingly beautiful. When we got there it was the same place as out first date. "So um how's the um weather." I asked Ally. "You wouldn't ask about that unless it was raining ice cream." Ally told me. "Well, I can't concentrate on anything but you." I told her. "Aww Austin, that's so sweet." she told me. Then we kissed and guess who was watching? You guessed it!! TRISH! She was staring at us until I gave her a glare and then she got the message. We talked and talked about the new songs we were gonna work on and just about EVERYTHING! Then our food we ordered came out and guess who served it? Trish AND Dez! "Here's the spaghetti you ordered." Dez said. "We didn't order spaghetti." I told him. " I know but it's the most romantic thing on the menu!" Trish said. "Fine, you can do it this time BUT, not again." I told them. We started eating our spaghetti and were eating the same noodle. We were *inches, centimeters, millimeters, negative millimeters when.. we kissed. Just as we touched lips I felt as if someone was turning me on a swing. The feeling made me dizzy like someone let go after turning me and I was getting faster, slower, then I stopped.* In real life we both pulled away. I could see Trish and Dez staring at us like they were watching two puppies wrestling.(in the cute way.) This time Ally gave them a glare and they both went back to their jobs. We talked and talked until we had to go. "I had an amazing time tonight, you really outdid yourself Austin Moon!" Ally told me. "I know, do you want me to walk you home?"I asked her. "Like I'm gonna walk home by myself in the cold weather,of course I would want you to walk me home!" She told me. "Well okay then." I said. *We walked together hand in hand together in peace.* When we came to Ally's porch. We said our goodbyes and Ally went inside. I saw Mr. Dawson coming toward me. He said "Austin, I want to let you know that all of Ally's ex boyfriends broke her heart. I believe that you won't do that, you will never leave her. *Promise me you'll never leave her side."* "I promise Mr.Dawson." I said. "Good, I believe you will." He said. Then he went inside and closed the door. As I was walking home I thought of before I dated Ally I had a hole in my heart that needed to be filled with love. When I dated Ally it was filled. Ally Dawson filled my heart with love, and I must do the same to hers. END OF STORY
 * That actually happened, my friend was spinning me on the swing and I was telling my friend a fanfiction about her and Harry Styles and talking about inches.. You get the point.


 * That was a line from a song that I sang in honors chorus called "I Hear America Singing"


 * That was a line from a song called "Walking Her Home" by Mark Schultz, it's really good, you should listen to it.

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