User blog comment:RikerIsHot/No Matter What-Chapter 1/@comment-11133912-20140710201209

I liked this chapter. :D Kinda short, but whatever works with you is fine. :) Man, Team Austin sure is oblivious today... XDEE Anyway, just one suggestion. Whenever a new character speaks, use a line break. For example, it would be re-written like this:

"Austin! I have some incredible news!" Ally said running into Sonic Boom with a huge smile on her face.

"What is it Ally?" Her Boyfriend/ Partner Austin asked curiously. "I have the chance to move to Ireland and write songs for a TV show!!!" Ally squealed happily.

"That's incredible! I've never been more proud of you." Austin said making Ally blush (They obviously were not thinking clearly)

"In a month I'll have my dream job" Ally said hugging Austin so tight he could barely breathe. He didn't care, though.

So yeah. The line breaks make it easier to read. :P Good luck with your fanfic! :D