Talk:Auslly/@comment-24241069-20140105022937

Hey everyone! Let me now how you like this Auslly story(If you like it i'll write 2 more parts)

Celebrations and Confusions

(It's in the evening of Ally's 18 birthday and she was texted by her dad to tidy up the shop before it closes for the night, it's 6:00 p.m, Ally walks up to the shop and get's out her keys to the door).

ALLY: That's strange, dad does't usally leave the store locked(unlocks and opens the door but almost falls to the floor)

AUSTIN, TRISH, AND DEZ: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

ALLY: Oh my gosh gye's I can't even........Thank You(runs over to hug Austin first)!!!

AUSTIN:(Smile's)

ALLY:(Hugs Trish and Dez) Who planned all of this(looks around the room in awe)

TRISH AND DEZ:(step back and look at Austin)

ALLY: Austin you did this?

AUSTIN:  Ally you 18, come on, it's the least I could do.

ALLY: (Smile's, runs over to Austin almost knocks him down with a hug) Thank you Austin.

AUSTIN:(Smile's)

TRISH: So what do you wan't to do first Ally?

ALLY: What games do you have planned?

TRISH: Well we could play the......... Oh the sack race!

ALLY: Let's do it!

So what do you gye's think? I know I spelled some words wrong, but I try'd my best.