User blog comment:Ausllygirlygirl/Truth Serum part one/@comment-5170103-20140516123128

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT (stop me when you get bored) LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!

First of all, I love Divergent so much. So the Divergent part made me get interested in this! I'm currently reading the second book, Insurgent (after reading the first book) and that truth serum part is from that book not the first book. That chapter was so tense!

The Auslly part of it was done really well! What I suggest to do is make a new line for each dialogue so it's easer to read. Other then that the rest was amazing!

You are an amazing writer! Have me subscribed! (: