User blog comment:Doggygirl10/Auslly Fanfic, Part 1: I Like Austin/@comment-5384369-20130420175642/@comment-5679384-20130420180529

I agree with the first one.

I'm going to edit it... a lot. I think I just jumped into the story, and I need to be more detailed. I'm going to make it a little more story like. I agree with the list thing also. I know it went too fast. I NEED to add a bunch of detail to it.

Anyway, thanks so much, Red! These really helped! :)